Wednesday, September 9, 2015

Winter Tournament

Maggie's sentence:
 I was so cold, that when my laces came undone and I tripped up and grazed my hands and made my knee bleed, I didn't even feel it!! But I can tell you, I felt it when I warmed up!!

Oliver's sentences:
The whole time my shirt stuck to my skin like a shroud and my shoes felt like they had an entire lake inside them! My body was literally steaming because all the droopy water was slowly but surely sliding down my hot body giving off a stinky, musty smell.    

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